This was a very good poem... 5/5

Wowowow... that was i great true so true poem... 5/5

This is completely true...although very sad....great flow 5/5

Awww what a great poem its so true though this world is hell and it feels like it keeps getting worse!
great job!!

I love this. it soo explains LIFE. good job. 5/5 you should go check out some of my poems.

That is pretty much what life is all about. and for that i think it is a really great poem. so i give it a 5/5

I loved this poem
as it opened up
and showed the true horrors of
th world and the things
that society tries so hard to hide.
But its all true and this is the reality
of the world we live in
and the cruelty that life offers.
Great job.
It was a really powerful write!
Keep it up.

Well this is ahmazing
and wayy true.

That was really great good work

End of a matter, spells victory. Against all odds, victory abounds.