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by william May 29, 2008 category : Love, romance / lost love
You coming out tonight man? starts me on a craze fiendish wicked ways dancing in a daze my pain is now a haze what else can i do i hurt so much over you i don't know how to make it through i love you.. that much is true telling me to find another girl? these dirty skanks make me want to hurl when they wobble and swirl tripping over there own feet trying to twirl i dance 2 feel good but always get put in the category that only sleazes should "I think you misunderstood" i just want to feel good again like i did back when i was a kid the only way 2 get rid of the hurt is to dance amid every1 so am i going out tonight...? do i even have a choice? yea, ill b out
by Grace
Let again another great poem!! a 5/5!! =)
by claire
I love this, the way you open it and then jump right in , and the ending's cool. i'd put an apostrophe in "ill" though just so the reader doesnt have to think about it.