Wish I could write as beautiful as you did to this poem, but somehow words they elude me.Say you have done justice for your love.

"So this my sweet is my clumsy attempt
To tell you exactly how much to me you meant
So no painting, or song, or bust can I give"

And who needs songs or sketches so perfect when words are all one needs to reassure someone we care and love (or cared and loved).Nice write.I like this one.Its romantic!!!!

1gray1 thank you so much for your lovely comment.My love you mention is my lovely wife and best friend of twenty odd tears.Grant

EXCELLENT!!!
I found it to be a very romantic and moving poem.
I LOVED IT!!

This is without a doubt the most beautiful expression of love and adoration I have ever read. Truly a work of art reguardless of the title 5 X 5/5

Every hair, every colour and all that you do
Is etched in my mind, till eternity too

I love that. I love taking things like mind or heart and make something out of them or writting something on them. Anything like that I adore and you did it well.

No nightingales song or angels choir
angel's* since it's showing ownership, it's the choir that belongs to the angels.

So no painting, or song, or bust can I give
But this I can tell you, its for you that I live

Awww it ended perfectly. :]

The rhyming was great along with the words used to describe this girl.

Excellent job. Five.

Well what can i tell you ,
love is god way to tell us how weak us men are
but same time lvoe can turn the dumbest man on earth into the smartest and the most expressionist poet in all time ,
all that you say here is right
and all that you express came out from my mouth ....

great poem i will add it to my favorite
5/5

*Gulp* This was one of the best love poems i have ever read, from you or anybody else. The ending was completely perfect and the whole poem just.. was stunning. My words cannot describe how beautiful this poem truly is. It was a terrific write and i am so glad i read it.. actually i read it over and over again because it was an amazing poem. This.. totally.. blew me away. What a fantastic write. Sorry i dont have much more to say.. but it was one of the most beautiful love poems i have ever read.
5/5

Perfect... This poem is just perfect..
What a wonderful way to portray your feelings...
Awesome....

What a truly lovely and heart rendering piece of Love poetry this is! I simply loved reading this.
A truly great piece of writing Grant!