by Forever Broken May 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
There's so much pain in every word |
by Empathy
Very interesting poem. I like how you kept your rhymes consistent, and how well they relate with your feelings. Overall I would say you did a good job with this. |
Secretly, openly, it's all u feel within...sorry if that's confusing..anyway..nice poem.. |
Wow! amazing poem i loved it soooooo much! |