Comments : The beast

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    It is true that people should unite their power and fight agains the beast together... As long as people are not united...beast will eat them one by one.. But if people would unite they would be strong enough together the enemy.

    It is so sad how the enemy is using this weakness and attack and create more misery in the already raped land...

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    You have penned a piece of dynamic magnitude. Words of strength and hope. Well done with great flow and structure.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Wow Grant:)

    I am going to read more of your earlier poems. This was so intense. I love how you said there should fist be unity in yourself, for that is so true...one should fist change himself and then the world.
    A gem of a poem:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid