I understand what you mean, nice poem and a great opinion on dreams. 5/5

I do like this, best on the page of poems so far. i like the idea of it and there were elements of a conversational tone (my favourite in poems) for example starting the line with "and."
however, some of the rhymes seemed a little forced, i don't know if it's just me because i used to write rhyming poetry and now i cant really stand it. but this was good.
i liked the message and the idea behind it.
good job,
4/5

I love this poem it was so meaningful. 5/5