by My Obsεssion May 29, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I want to be your every tear |
beautiful, absolutly beautiful. it is one of the best love poems i have read on here. its very...true. thats what people want. great job! |
Thanks everyone. Yes I am definetly trying to extend the 2nd part but im still not sure whether to keep it as one poem or not, i'll just decide once i get the 2nd part extended. I've just had a hectic couple of weeks and no time at all, sorry bout the delay I should have time to work on it soon. And thanks eveyone for reading, voting and commenting on it. You have no idea how much it means to me!! |
by patricia
good job that was great i realli lyked u obvously showed how much u care 4 the person ur writing about good job and keep up the good work ur very talented |
by LeAnNe
wow! hun, you did an amazing job on this poem! I absolutely loved it. I agree with kristina and tiffany and think you should extend the second part. it was beautifully written and i cant wait to see what you do with the second part! |
by Timothy r
Beautiful..absolutely beautiful, cannot wait for the other one. Love, Tim |