I died inside

by SilentlyDyingInside   May 30, 2008


It's not your fault.
Because you weren't there.
The night I died inside.
The night I felt unsafe.
When I cried my eyes out.
And my soul disappeared from me.
Right out of my reach my soul raised up.
As I died inside.
That fateful night.
I couldn't breathe.
I could feel my heart beating slower.
I could since that no one was around.
As I died inside.
And then I fell asleep and dreamed of you.
And I died inside more and more.
And when I woke up.
I wasn't better.
I was worse.
I died inside more through the day.
And I felt more unsafe around that house.
With constant fighting.
And screaming from you.
I died inside little by little.
And soon I'll die everywhere.
But right now I'm only dieing inside.
And there's nothing you can do to change that.
As I die inside.

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  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    -I couldn't breathe.
    I could feel my heart beating slower.
    I could since that no one was around.-
    ooooo loved that part! so much emotion and anger !
    repeating - i could- just amplifies the feeling.

    -But right now I'm only *dieing* inside.- ack lol mispelled there n_n
    it's really good now! like really! so glad you wrote more!
    5/5!!!! =P again lol

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    -It's not your fault.
    Because you weren't there.-
    short true, aa there should be more. it has such a nice flow.
    n_n nice poem keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    To die inside is such an interesting thing to me nice poem short but sweet 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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