I miss those good days to and nice write you really captured the surrending of joy in this poem 5/5 |
Wow...I miss the good old days too! No worries, no troubles! Excellent work! You grabbed my attention and my imagination! |
They're surrendering purity. |
by Bugg
Aww, luckily I'm not old enough to miss my childhood yet! I don't think it flowed very well, but I adored the words and imagery that you used. |
Children that consider themselves |
by NinjaGirl
The good old days, hehe. i kind of think i may have grown up too fast after reading this piece. it was amazingly written and i'm sure that a lot of people can relate to it. |