too long, but very good none the less,
I think you should get rid of alot of the parts that are not your favorites, cuting it down in size by at least half. My favorite piece was the one that went:

kiss my lips
when were together
kiss my lips
because a kiss is forever

i almost think that should be the end one. its got a lovely feeling to it. a perfect wrap up.

Wow. I really like this one too. It is a tad bit long, but still it's really good. I can see that you like to like to repeat the title of your poems in every other sentence. I agree with Randy East, and perfect way to end it would be @ kiss my lips
when were together
kiss my lips
because a kiss is forever

Very touching and wonderful. Such beauty.