The moments

by Finalgravedigger   May 30, 2008


( Its not one of my best writes and i know the meter is off but i hope yall enjoy^^)

Ever changing happiness seems only to last a short moment
With it however foreshadows long scorching torment.

Childhood innosense will always die
As corruption teaches us to cry,
A glorious rose glistens at first
then withering shriveled petals show the worst.

Even the road of love and heart
Are the ones that lead to being torn apart,
Laughs of joys become everlasting tears
Just as confidence is replaced by fear.

Our triumphs and glories are at the short end of life's stick
Emptiness and lies are what we usually mimic,
Were alive for a time and rest for eternity
So just embrace and remember the happy part of life's story.

Most people's journals are filled with pain
yet short hopeful paragraphs prove our existence is vain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Illusion

    This had best rhyming words in it and they seem so apt. nothing can be changed inthe poem to make it better.

    innosense->innocence(line 3)

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lima Pappa

    You got a gift!

    I realy love your work

  • I like this poem! It made me think a lot, seriously. I think about when I do write in my journal. It is normally about the bad things going on in my life and not about the good things. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Wow, this poem really makes you think, huh? I liked it and I don't usually read poems in the Life cat. So, good job. :) I thought it was wonderful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Janalicious14

    Wow...
    that made me think of my life huh!
    I like it because It made me wonder!
    well, 5/5!