by eehcuhhhz
First stanza. |
Oh, watch the syllabication in the first stanza. Your ending line in that verse is a tad too long -- and when you're rhyming, that's a huge thing. But it still works ;) |
by NinjaGirl
A short but very beautiful and true write |
Wow... |
by Bugg
Wow, this poem really makes you think, huh? I liked it and I don't usually read poems in the Life cat. So, good job. :) I thought it was wonderful. |
I like this poem! It made me think a lot, seriously. I think about when I do write in my journal. It is normally about the bad things going on in my life and not about the good things. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work. |
by Lima Pappa
You got a gift! |
by Illusion
This had best rhyming words in it and they seem so apt. nothing can be changed inthe poem to make it better. |