Carry On

by HeavenzEyez   May 29, 2004




Carry on talking
Your so romantic
Carry on walking
I want to stand by your side
Carry on hugging me
You hug me with so much pride
Carry on kissing
I love how it makes me feel
Carry on missing
Me when I’m not around
Carry on speaking
What a wonderful sound
Carry on thinking
I love what’s in your mind
Carry on loving me
Its so very kind
Carry on being my sea
So deep and beautiful
Carry touching my heart
It stops it floating apart
Carry on calling
It lights up my eyes
Carry on stopping me falling
It’s a great surprise
Carry on just being you
I can’t ask for more
Carry on doing what you do
I love you are you are, please know

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    This truly wonderful. I treasured it much.

  • 20 years ago

    by XJulesX

    Hey, this is a really good poem! I like the way you had repeated carry on to show what you like this person doing. The idea of the poem is just wonderful. I just don't under stand the last line. Keep up the good work!

  • 20 years ago

    by East Poetry

    this is a beautful poem. I love the way you wrote it. let me point out some very miner errors for you so your readers keep giving it the justice it diserves.

    Change:
    carry touching my heart

    To:
    carry on touching my heart

    And change:
    I cant ask for more

    To:
    I cant ask for more to show

    And lastly:
    I love you are you are, please know

    to:
    I love you how you are, please know

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