Flowering Guilt

by WaitAutumn   May 30, 2008


I am the stain you can't clean
The moment ingraved in your memory
I am the bliss running down your opened wrists
Cut in deeper my darling

I am the dart lacerating your heart
Thrown to take away the pieces,
as you fall apart
Let me in my precious

I am the flowering guilt you dread
The unforgivable choice you took
I am the love you murdered
Let your tears fall as I spread

I am the flame devouring from inside
Flickering my sweet warmth
Without me, empty as stone you'll be
My patience has a limit, don't push me aside

I am the shadow watching over you
The mistakes you commit
I am the only to be counted on
Believe me my love, I'd never be untrue

I will be your last breath
Let me protect you from all harm
Take me just once more
And I promise you, I' ll follow you to death

-never believed in forever-

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  • 16 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    Nicely written.....You could really picture what was happening. I loved the choice of words. Good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Amazing !! simply amazing. This poem is def. one of my favorites.
    My favorite part was this

    "I am the flowering guilt you dread
    The unforgivable choice you took
    I am the love you murdered
    Let your tears fall as I spread"

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Awesome!!...actually it was too hard to choose which stanza I liked the most in ur poem becoz the whole poem is so nice...but the part that touched me the most was
    I am the shadow watching over you
    The mistakes you commit
    I am the only to be counted on
    Believe me my love, I'd never be untrue
    U r talented..keep it up5/5
    thx fr ur comment on my poem..

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentlyDyingInside

    Wow amazing poem very well written and i loved every word!

  • 16 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    I've read it about four times and I still feel there is something else hidden in that poem, in those deep lines... Definitely it was a profound write, and it can suggest so many things... However, one thing was all clear, the emotion, the feeling it portrayed: loneliness, exasperation, harrowing frustration, the inevitable permanent companion, surrounding shadow, pain. Well, it was an excellent write, not dark actually, but really heartbreaking. Keep it up! 5/5

    Btw, I loved the repetition ' I am.. ' ^^. Wonderful job!

    Take care,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

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