Comments : My senses of You

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This is sweet and sensitive poem, no doubt about it. I like how you describe taste of kisses... It creates...very...sweet and sensual image...

    I think...when I read this poem through...there is like 3 places...I just smile..

    You are really sensitive man, aren't you? ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    LOL! Some of these lines were just delightful to read. Well all of them were delightful, but a few made me giggle. :D The butter on toast and the jam one. XD

    The ending lines were well developed and I really loved On sun warmed skin
    Like butterflies on roses for the nectar within. That was great. :]

    Five out of five.

    An uplifting poem indeed. :]