Saying sorry is a crime!!

by waiting 4 some1   May 30, 2008


Mister my best friend let me tell you this
You still don't understand so I will clear this mess

You thought "I am really sorry" will get me back
You thought "I swear I regret it" will mend that crack

Have you thought I am a perfume was showing for sale
Whenever you want you can inhale?
Or were you thinking I am a doll or a toy
You only get me back when you want to enjoy?
No my dear, I am not your toy neither your boy
I am a person with a heart and soul
I have feelings too I am not a wall

You swore to me but I see no truth behind it
Why did you not apologize when you first did it?
I told you I am upset and I told you to stop
But you did not and continued on that slope

It's funny and weird that you expect me to forgive
Since you only want to take and you don't want to give
You don't mind seeing me half dead as long as you live
It's funny and weird but I already did forgive, because you are my best

But please, please answer this...

"I am sorry" was it that hard to say it on time?
Oh! "I am sorry", maybe saying it early was a crime

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Deep, thats real deep.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Super poem, strong and very intense. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Amazing piece. Really well written. It's amazing how another person's actions can fuel one into writing something so great.
    Every stanza is so deep and each emotion portrayed so easily. 5/5 from me. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    I agree with Ingrid too, sometimes sorry is the hardest word to say. And its harder when the person knows that he is mistaken. Admitting that we are wrong takes a lot of courage and power and so does forgiving someone. I hope you find your courage and do what is right.
    Great poem, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Hey Ya I did not realize it until One day Long ago I thought I had 2 say SORRY to sumne.... But I could nt n it was so hard..

    N One day I met d fren n b4 I cud say it D fren said I want 2 sa sumthing..

    I t said I hav 2 say sumthing..

    N tan d argument continued as to who will say first n it was like two Rats trying 2 tie a bell around d cats neck..

    N suddenl d other said I want to apolgise n ZI m sorry N I to said I too wanted t sa d same thing....

    N we cud nt stop laughing n ya we r still best frens after this incident tat happened 17 years back in time...

    N this poem of urs refreshed those memories...

    It has emotions, pain, n sumthing to teach, sumthing to learn...

    Fantastic work...

    Keep it up..

    Best wishes 2 ADEL fr his writes to come..

    ................Karan:)