Kayla!!!! this is absolutely beautiful, babe. Honest to goodness. It's so realistic in the beginning, not only to this specific person...but to anybody who has ever felt broken. and so it's applicable to everyone's life, which is the reason many people read poems. looking for their own meaning.

Oh, sweet little angel,
Still trying to fly on broken wings.
Remember you're beautiful no matter what.
Though the rest of the world doesn't see,
I know that you'll fly someday.

^ i LOOOOVEEEED this stanza. it's just so...you. lol. it's so positive and just beautiful. very very much like your attitude, most of the time. wonderful, hon.

5.5

Oh, wow, this almost brought tears
hun your a wonderful poet
writing this poem was a sweet thing to do,
5/5

Kayla,
this was penned very deeply, with sincerity to melt the heart.
I really think you did an excellent job on this, and you should show the girl it... Maybe you can make friends and brighten her day just that much more..
I think she'd appreaciate it; knowing someone cares...

Very Well Done.
--Elaine