This is pretty good,
I am no expert BUT heres is probley a tip you alrighty know!

your poems dont have to ryme right after every stanza...
but other that that this is great,
a little more pratice and im sure you can take this far in your life!!!!

((5))

I love the message in this-and portrayed through a puppet show is VERY clever.
Keep writing sweetie!!!

(oh and another 5)

Wow i must say tt u're very imaginative...n truely talented poet ... the detailed description and the flow all just falls into proper place... i absolutely love ;)

I like this poem its relatable and it's pretty work on the flow it doesn't always have to ryme but iot's pretty anyways can you read and comment some of my poems too

Really liked this one. i could feel your anxiety and insecurities. great poem.