I love you

by JD   May 31, 2008


Mouths move with words unspoken
Lips respond and hearts unbroken
Sparks of fury, light the flame
Passion erupts, without a shame

Body's grind, and rub in array.
Soul's leave and fly away.
Whispers, float and drift above.
This is my sweet forever love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    1,395
    That is a sad amount of people to have read any poem, much less a poem as beautifully well spoken as this one and not even take the time to comment / 3 votes with an average of 4.7 and one of those votes was my 5/5 --Is this a poetry community or a slumber party ?

    JD this is a well written beautifully expressed, heartfelt piece of poetry regardless of what people don't say!

    It is going on my favorites list

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Powerful !
    I dont think i have ever read anything
    ths short with so much power of expression.
    I am amazed by it's beautiful flow .

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