Comments : Trying to say Goodbye

  • I loved it...
    Nice job...

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    So things haven't really changed,
    I told you how I feel,
    You said you were shocked,
    As you went with a new girl.
    --been there : / sucks but a lot of people will relate to you on this opening

    Now things don't feel the same,
    I can no longer look at your face,
    Its so different,
    And so hard to erase.
    --i like how you worded this one because its true when you love someone you can't just try and make it into a friendship it would never work

    So I lie in bed at night,
    Looking at the moon,
    Thinking and thinking,
    More and more of you.
    --i have done that and can say it is no fun at all

    I kept telling myself,
    More and more each time,
    You weren't worth my tears,
    Yet they fall helplessly down my eyes.
    ---this gives a sense of no control like you want to get over him but your heart is not going cooperating

    I can't help this feeling,
    It feels way too strong,
    To keep it bottled up,
    And kept inside for so long.
    ---this makes me wonder what is going to happen since you just kept it all inside

    You shattered my one hope,
    My hope for you each day,
    As I replaced it with a new one,
    That my feelings for you decay.
    ---this is good it shows that your are moving on

    You may ask if I still like you,
    I will answer this with a lie,
    Because deep down inside,
    I'm still trying to say goodbye.....
    ---aww...great ending i didn't expect it because of the stanza before
    5/5 !