A great write, the meter was excellent and imagery vivid.

I personally know lots of people living a lie and sharing their unforfilled dreams with another. I chose not to do this and broke free of unhappiness. At least I now have the chance to be free, to love and to be loved.

Michael

I loved the message in this.

"Search yourself for all you need
Love yourself and you'll succeed
Shut out all who bring you down
Do not drink their hate and drown"

that's very good advice.

this was wonderfully written. your word choice suited the poem, and the rhythmn was perfect. and, as always, amazing imagery.