My Suicide

by morgan   May 29, 2004


I'm standing in the darkness,clutching a knife in my hand.
asking my self why, no one could ever understand.

should i take the knife to my wrist, or should i shove it through my heart.
either way I'd suffer, so at my wrist i start.

i watch as blood drips down my arm, and runs onto the floor.
i scream as tears come pouring down, as now I'm wanting more.

deeper and deeper, into my skin it cuts.
the knife so sharp and bloody, head filled with suffocated thoughts.

i push the knife in deeper, into my wrist it rips.
more blood comes pouring out, flowing to my fingertips.

so much blood I'm getting scared, the end is coming near.
i let out a piercing scream that i know no one will hear.

again i start cutting, up and down my arm.
then a knock on my door, i look up in alarm.

i feel so very weak, as i drop onto the floor.
I'm crawling toward my death, i cant take it anymore.

the last thing i see, is my blood as it begins to flow.
as i hear a distant voice saying hold on, don't let go.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    don't ever take yourself away from me, i wouldnt be able to stand it. i am always here for you, to love you, and help you through anything. if you died i would kill myself. i love you.

  • 20 years ago

    by Emma!!!

    I though it was a great poem but upsettin but this is how ppl feel well done

  • 20 years ago

    by Anita

    nice poem it really made me think about some things i had a friend who liked himself and i always wonder why he did it.

  • 20 years ago

    by Patricia

    Thanks for commenting on mine i appreciate the feed back. that was really great as is a lot of ur other work . you have a lot of potential. keep doin good like that :)

  • 20 years ago

    by SQUISHY

    that was a sad yet amazing poem