Comments : Words vs Actions

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is so neat! I like how you wrote about this and said to you words mean little, and stuff.

    "Lies fall from people's lips
    like flakes of winter's snow."

    I love how you use a simile here, makes the poem really really good!! You wrote such truth, and it was all straight from your heart. Take care, :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Janalicious14

    Wow!
    such a wonderful poem of yours huh!
    ahaha..
    I really like it!
    5/5