The Poem I Wrote

by maida   May 31, 2008


I wrote a poem for young world one day
I cheaked it and re cheaked it and sent it away

Every Saturday i woke up early full of hope
But not seeing my poem in print was hard to cope

A week and another and another week passed
In seeing if my poem was published at last

On the third week i lost the hope of seeing my poem in print
But on fourth it was in print, want to take a squint?

In front of you my poem lies
Which you are reading with your own two eyes!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This one seems to be just you, I can't find it on google.

    SOO

    I'm VERY proud to find a poem that you actually wrote. I think that there is some potential here. And I really hope you were the one to write it. Yay!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    It's 'check' not 'cheak'. Haha, nice ending though, it's comical in a way, but a happy ending!
    Perhaps you should try being more...subtle, like adding depth to it.

  • 16 years ago

    by maida

    Thnx!!

  • 16 years ago

    by maida

    AWESOME!