Tailored Heart

by David ODonnell   May 31, 2008


Be it not that I chose this path
Or followed blind along love's wrath
I came out crying and broken mind
From the girl I loved and left behind

I left her once and ran straight back
A mistake I made when I left the track
I couldnt help or help her see
That I'm her man to a certain degree

I gave it all from blood to sweat
I tried so hard, so hard to forget
That shes the one, the one for me
The one special love that is destined to be

But now shes happy and I am not
And shes moved on and probably forgot
This special man inside of me
Who cries for her and to be free

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lettredufront

    U did a great job! very nice written. Especially this part :I tried so hard, so hard to forget
    That shes the one, the one for me
    The one special love that is destined to be.
    I just loved it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Wasn't**( every word wasn't as clique) (sorry for the typo)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Very true and amzing poem... i liked the comment said above "effortlessly relatable".. your poem flowed beautifully and every word was as clique as i lost you and i loved you but had true meaning behind it, you could see the futrationa dn the wanting to let her go but still love her... your poem inspired me and others as well and gave us a heartache that we can all effortlessly relate to. i could try to think of something contructive to say to read build the poem but i think in the end of it all the only downside to this poem was that it wasn't longer...

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    It's effortlessly relatable.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    This poem is amazing and completely real. I loved that you could put out such a strong message in a very short poem. I loved it!!
    5/5

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