Aww. This is so sad. Powerful work.

I must say this poem hit me hard because I'm sitting here wishing the guy who left would feel the way you described in the poem. The part about coming back at least. The thing I liked first off about the poem was how the title was creative. It wasn't used as a line in the poem, it was unique. And as to the poem itself the emotions in it the regret of leaving, and the fact that you still love her came across very clearly. The rhyming of the lines was good, but there were certain places that I liked the words you chose much better than others. my 2 favorite sets of words you rhymed were mind and behind, and not and forgot. The lines those 2 sets were in also added to the fact that they stuck out to me. Very good poem. I give it 5/5

I am a guy and this almost made me cry

Wow ... this poem hit me.. been stopping myself from reading love poems but your poem.. my god... its just well i am speechless and at loss of words.. it is a sad poem but also so very powerful. i love it though, sorry you are going through this though.

Wow yet another one of yours I can totally see as my situation. Its actually quite comforting (in a weird way) that others have felt and been through the same. It's been 2 and a half years since ive seen my ex and i know hes moved on and here i am alone. thank you for writing that. :-)
Great work!

Wow heartbreaking ,adorable , and sad ...I loved it well written & beautifully penned 5/5

Impressive piece...

Okay, first off --
Wow.
This was such a touching piece. Even though it wasn't long, it was so powerful. You really got the message across. Keep up the amazing, breath-taking work.

- Shanna

This is a very good poem. it flows and rhymes great and the message was very clear and strong.

This poem is amazing and completely real. I loved that you could put out such a strong message in a very short poem. I loved it!!
5/5

It's effortlessly relatable.

Very true and amzing poem... i liked the comment said above "effortlessly relatable".. your poem flowed beautifully and every word was as clique as i lost you and i loved you but had true meaning behind it, you could see the futrationa dn the wanting to let her go but still love her... your poem inspired me and others as well and gave us a heartache that we can all effortlessly relate to. i could try to think of something contructive to say to read build the poem but i think in the end of it all the only downside to this poem was that it wasn't longer...

Wasn't**( every word wasn't as clique) (sorry for the typo)

U did a great job! very nice written. Especially this part :I tried so hard, so hard to forget
That shes the one, the one for me
The one special love that is destined to be.
I just loved it! 5/5