Tears fall down

by Nikki   May 31, 2008


When i think about you,

I feel nothing,

I feel as if i never knew you,

Never met you,

But i think back to that summer,

where great things happened,

I felt as happy as ever before,

But we had to say goodbye

As soon as we said Hello,

The everything started to crash and burn,

right in front of my face,

A year went by,

We talked everyday,

Feeling so safe knowing i had

you by my side,

But knowing that i couldn't,

see your beautiful eyes ever again,

Brought tears to my eyes,

everyday we talked,

Breaking me apart slowly,

Time passes,

Now we've grown more apart than ever before,

And some days it bugs me

But more than anything most days i don't care,

Days pass,

you never Cross my mind.

The memories from that summer,

consume my thoughts,

every so little,

Sometimes hear your voice,

And tears fall down my face,

knowing I'll never get back the chance to Make things right,

Again tears fall down,

Knowing you wont see the person I've become,

I'm not breaking inside,

I'm just missing what was,

And what i hope could happen,

You never cross my mind,

That summer was years ago,

It's long gone,

The past is long gone,

Just another memory,

To consume my thoughts,

Tears fall down

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  • 15 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    I liked it losing that summer someone is something alot me people im thru so its easy to relate to it was a little vague but thats how memories get so i think it was presented well to fit the poem good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    There are some statements in this poem that don't make sense, I feel nothing? then you write a mass about how he or she effected your life. finishing with tears fall strange.
    4/5 Ray S

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    "The everything started to crash and burn"

    Passion could be the everything that burns but it is no fun to crash
    perhaps you meant
    Then everything started to crash and burn
    Your feeling are expressed well in each line
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Perfectly express ur emotions here, and the flow even the rhyme was good, all the words are very expressive and it touches everyone's heart. great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    They emotion in this piece is good I like the way you ended it and I could relate to what you wrote.
    A coulple of mistakes:
    "every so little" - ever so little
    "Sometimes hear your voice" - sometimes I hear your voice
    Except for this the poem was very well written.