by Nikki May 31, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
When i think about you, |
I liked it losing that summer someone is something alot me people im thru so its easy to relate to it was a little vague but thats how memories get so i think it was presented well to fit the poem good job |
There are some statements in this poem that don't make sense, I feel nothing? then you write a mass about how he or she effected your life. finishing with tears fall strange. |
"The everything started to crash and burn" |
by Sweet lig
Perfectly express ur emotions here, and the flow even the rhyme was good, all the words are very expressive and it touches everyone's heart. great job 5/5 |
by Adelle
They emotion in this piece is good I like the way you ended it and I could relate to what you wrote. |