by H E Losey May 31, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Somewhere beating, two hearts in harmony |
A fire is one word in the since you were using it. |
For me.. the somehow and someway was too much for me.. You repeated it a lot. I know, I know, that's probably how you meant it to be.. But I don't know. Just my opinion. overall, I like the whole meaning of the poem though. Great write. 5/5. |