Comments : Somewhere - Someday - Somehow - Someway

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    For me.. the somehow and someway was too much for me.. You repeated it a lot. I know, I know, that's probably how you meant it to be.. But I don't know. Just my opinion. overall, I like the whole meaning of the poem though. Great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    A fire is one word in the since you were using it.

    In the last stanza you capitalized the S in someway and you also put a period which is inconsistent with the lack of punctuation throughout the poem.

    The title pulled me in and the style caught my eye. I couldn't help but to read this wonder work of art. I love the way it is set up and the rhyming worked nicely except for the fact that misery has no PERFECT rhyme. Using harmony as an end rhyme worked out nicely though, so good job. Five out of five.