Bert
Welcome back :) I was so excited when I saw you had posted a new poem...and it is a beauty.

In Winter, along the iced ponds
It will be so good to walk together on dead leaves,
and to look at the snow whirling with the wind,
I shall have a soft spot for you.

The imagery in each stanza is wonderful. Your love is shining from each word. I picked this sanza because I love the winter. I love how you have brought each season into this poem.

I shall hear your voice,
And read your so soft and tender letters,
For ever my dear, for ever for life,
I shall have much more than a soft spot for you.

This last stanza ends this piece so well. How many fond moments we hold in our hearts for the one we love.

Excellent!
Love Cindy

So romantic and beautiful Bert...full of vivid imagery of nature's finest displays set as a background to wonderful verses of love!

"The sun will spatter Summer of its light,
Gilding the crops for our future bread,
And the heat haze will veil the skyline,
I shall have a soft spot for you."

^Love these lines! awesome word choices and imagery!

5/5 Take care, Debbie

Vivid imagery in this sweet, romantic piece. I love the way you describe the seasons and convey how through all the seasons as they may change your love never will.......absolutely beautiful!

Aww, such beauty and tenderness within these words! You did an amazing job, Bert:)
Welcome back!

Hugs,

Ingrid