Comments : The watch

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    I really loved this poem...It says so much. It's just well written and I dunno I could go on forever and ever but I know how you felt in this and I love it. I've never known of love to be portrayed as a watch. But it does make sense 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn Ariscent

    I hope you don't mind me commenting on the fact that the whole story is true. It's hard to write about it in a way that makes sense and for other people to understand. Your writing is absolutely amazing in this poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    Thanks dawn. lol, it really is in my dresser drawer, for everytime u've asked.