WoW..that would be really hard to go through.
It was a really sad emotional poem
I loved it 5/5

Wow im absolutely speechless. i dont even kno how to start..the flow was fantasitc. and you chose your words wisely. this poem was so pure, so honest yet sad. it was perfect.
job well done 5/5.

-ashlei.

Ack that was hard to read
so much emotion but very well described
**wanted to save you but not burn you with fire,
Watching you drown in my pearly ocean of innocence and purity,** loved that part
5/5 n_n

Wow! It really moved me! Keep it up 5/5