Unspoken

by LESBIAN KIZZEZ   May 31, 2008


Old poem

Its been so long
Its been five years
Turn around and you will see
Im still standing here
Five years ago I loved you
And today I still feel the same
But those feelings are hidden
Those words never came
I always wanted to tell you
How you make me feel
We've been apart for so long
Yet the tear rejection still kill
Though your heart belongs to her
Yet I still waited
Wishing that one day you will
Stop loving her
And when I cry
You tell me how its too hard to take
But I still try to smile
While my heart slowly breaks
When you ask me who I love
I describe the things
You say and do
But I say the name of someone else
Yet the person I describe everytime is actualy you
And when I cry
You will always be there
And ask me what's wrong
And ill make up a lie
To cover the pain
Cause I can't tell
You what's really going on
But when I hear your voice
Nothing matters any more
And even when you just talking
It erases all the pain I felt before
I want to tell you every single day
I want to know every second
If you feel the same way
All I can do is write my
Feelings for you down
Cause I know these are
Unspken words ill never say

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh wow this is filled with pure emotion. It really touched me and i loved how you expressed your feelings. It's really well written and flows nicely, i'm still amazed! It was so great reading this poem :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    This is such a great read. The part about you describing her but not naming her touches something deep within me, and for you to put the raw feelings into words, that is such a feat which you have managed to accomplished nicely. Great work! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by charles

    Exellent, for the record, is everything I tried to say but was so torn just couldn't find the words

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    A very heartfelt write,Sincere with true and raw emotion. ( I think you should tell her, you never know.)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Amazing poem...i could relate to this sooo much
    definetly 5/5:)
    p.s- thanks for the comment:)

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