by Lisa
Good job...5/5 |
by mommytobe
WOW!!!!! thats exactly how i feel right now. |
by ameena
I am absolutly speechless... |
by Tiffany
Wow.. I loved it.. very emotional nd powerful.. great job.. keep it up.. you're very good!!.. |
Wow Girl I know exactly how you feel.... |
by Sora
Wow! this was beautiful. i loved it! it was amazingly written, and very pure. a lovely flow and you spoke from your heart. job well done. 5/5. |
by Cheyanne
Amazing poem...i could relate to this sooo much |
by Deana
A very heartfelt write,Sincere with true and raw emotion. ( I think you should tell her, you never know.) |
by charles
Exellent, for the record, is everything I tried to say but was so torn just couldn't find the words |
This is such a great read. The part about you describing her but not naming her touches something deep within me, and for you to put the raw feelings into words, that is such a feat which you have managed to accomplished nicely. Great work! 5/5 |
by Jenni
Oh wow this is filled with pure emotion. It really touched me and i loved how you expressed your feelings. It's really well written and flows nicely, i'm still amazed! It was so great reading this poem :) |