Comments : Unspoken

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Good job...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by mommytobe

    WOW!!!!! thats exactly how i feel right now.

  • 16 years ago

    by ameena

    I am absolutly speechless...
    i love this poem...nd swettie i've also felt the same way...so u aren't alone...:]

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Wow.. I loved it.. very emotional nd powerful.. great job.. keep it up.. you're very good!!..

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Ally Kat Xx In love xX

    Wow Girl I know exactly how you feel....
    Its a great poem, I like it!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow! this was beautiful. i loved it! it was amazingly written, and very pure. a lovely flow and you spoke from your heart. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Amazing poem...i could relate to this sooo much
    definetly 5/5:)
    p.s- thanks for the comment:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    A very heartfelt write,Sincere with true and raw emotion. ( I think you should tell her, you never know.)

  • 15 years ago

    by charles

    Exellent, for the record, is everything I tried to say but was so torn just couldn't find the words

  • 14 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    This is such a great read. The part about you describing her but not naming her touches something deep within me, and for you to put the raw feelings into words, that is such a feat which you have managed to accomplished nicely. Great work! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh wow this is filled with pure emotion. It really touched me and i loved how you expressed your feelings. It's really well written and flows nicely, i'm still amazed! It was so great reading this poem :)