Wow this is reallyyy good. you are an amazing writer and your work has so much meaning. 5/5 =]

Ahaha.. this poem makes me remind off the Lord above.. ahaha.. a very operational poem of yours! 5/5

A very beautiful piece of poetry. the rhyme was a bit on and off here and there but i really believe that it is a beautiful piece. it touched me deeply.

Each one that is born of the flesh
Is certainly destined once to die
The true mystic senses that there is
More to life than what meets the eye
^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
the true bane of humans. to live is to die. i loved this stanza

5/5

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~