First

by April   Jun 1, 2008


In his car they sat
The parking lot was empty

He took her in his arms
He held her close

She layed her head on his shoulder
He gently lifted her chin

He kissed her softly
Mins went by

He broke the kiss
She smiled up at him

Her first real kiss
She knew she was in love.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is really nice reading, your sentences draws one to read the next. Its nice how you described the steps too. Poetically its abit short of expectation, thats because the situation you have just described is really romantic, so passionate and you could have described it more. Your poem kind of denies the reader a chance to get into the situation because you rushed over it. Keep up.

  • 16 years ago

    by ruth

    That was really simple and cute!

  • 16 years ago

    by This Love is Crazy

    WOW...I love this..it totally reminds me of my first kiss........Beautiful!!

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