WOW...I love this..it totally reminds me of my first kiss........Beautiful!!

That was really simple and cute!

This is really nice reading, your sentences draws one to read the next. Its nice how you described the steps too. Poetically its abit short of expectation, thats because the situation you have just described is really romantic, so passionate and you could have described it more. Your poem kind of denies the reader a chance to get into the situation because you rushed over it. Keep up.