by Bugg Jun 1, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I'm just stopping by to say hi |
This poem has a really great flow. the structure could have been better. you have a unique gift for poetry. keep up the great work! 5/5 |
That was so touching. It's like this completely normal conversation and then BAM! You find out all this time you've been talking to his grave. A very touching piece that too many ppl can relate to. Well done with rhyme and the flow was pretty good too! |
by Zak
Great poem. |
This poem showed a lot of imagination thankfully that is all it was but the rhyme scheme was perfect and it invoked much emotion |
Wow that poem struck me. I dont have a dad. I havent seen him in 6 years. I hate him with all my heart. nice poem by the way to get me a little rallied up by one is hard. |