by Zack
Wow, this is really touching. But I just talked to your dad today... Why did you kill your father?!?! lol I'm just kidding. I know how much you love your dad. I think that maybe the last stanza needs a little bit of work, but that's really it. I think it's great. |
by Krathia
Touching. This poem truly expresses the familiarity and distance between two very close people. Does that make sense? It's written in letter format, along with all the little absurdities we include in them that doesn't really matter. |
This is a very well written love that has made me very emotional |
Wow this poem was very emotional. It was filled with love. I was in tears by the end. Keep up the good work. |
by ALEX
Oh man. I'm pretty close to crying. I read this out loud, and it's beautiful, and honest, and amazing. You're a strong person, I can tell. |
Beautiful just beautiful great job. a work of art it really express ur love for ur father. |
by Bugg
My dad didn't die. I just wrote this poem because I don't really know what I'd do if he did die. I don't even want to think about it. Richie is my dad's little brother; he's 2 years younger than my dad. I dunno. I put myself in the future and this is just how I would probably deal with something like that. |
by HvN
Amazing piece of work, keep it up!!! |
Very good poem. It reminds me of the poem that you commented of mine :) and how much of this I'd probably be doing if I do end up moving. |
by KemistryKia
I luved it |
by Robin Tanner
OMG...what a awesome poem..it's so touching, i felt like a tear run down my cheek by the end of it, keep of the great work 5/5 |
by Ares
Wow! i totally didn't see that end coming! amazing!! |
by ECILA ice
Hmm.. actualy i was expecting a different story but i was wrong, nice twist.. kindda lonely, nice flow, and great ending. |
by Lonely Rider
This is simply amazing piece... actually the ending makes it even more touching and hearfelt... I read it before but i forgot to comment on it .. :) |
by maria
I thought it was wonderfly! :)))) |
by Becca
This poem was beautiful. It really spoke to me, and brought tears to my eyes. I appreciate this poem. |
Wow that poem struck me. I dont have a dad. I havent seen him in 6 years. I hate him with all my heart. nice poem by the way to get me a little rallied up by one is hard. |
This poem showed a lot of imagination thankfully that is all it was but the rhyme scheme was perfect and it invoked much emotion |
by Zak
Great poem. |
That was so touching. It's like this completely normal conversation and then BAM! You find out all this time you've been talking to his grave. A very touching piece that too many ppl can relate to. Well done with rhyme and the flow was pretty good too! |