Somewhere Out There

Somewhere out there
Across the 50 states
The best people I know
Come together cuz of fate

[ Omg, the most perfect opening for this poem! It's so real.. people that are nowhere NEAR each other but are bound to meet one another by fate. It's like... something a dreamer would say. Too true though, too true. I think we all feel this same way, hun. You captured everything perfectly here. I loved it. ]

Sharing broken hearts
And troubled times at home
Pouring out their hearts in words
None can hurt alone

[ Omg.. more than true. We are all family, and you got that point across wonderfully here. We are all there for each other and wouldn't ever let someone we consider family cry alone. We all share each other's pain and you really showed that in this stanza. ]

Always there for each other
In the good times and the bad
Hugging happy sisters
Giving shoulders to the sad

[ Omg, I just LOVE how you worded this stanza. Once again, you showed that family side of this club to everyone. It's perfect though. You didn't lie or make up anything. That is all realistic. We do hug each other and lead a shoulder to those who need it. Gah! Amazing, my dear. ]

Somewhere out there
My family gets online
Helping write each others story
Line after line after line....

[ The most PERFECT ending to such a beautiful and meaningful poem! And you're right, we do help write one another's story. We are all there for each other... getting to know each other better every single day. Many of us wouldn't be the same if we hadn't of met each other on here. Great job, hunni. ]

Tara.. I have to say this is one of the best friendship poems I have EVER read. Especially because you wrote it just for our little family. You used such amazing language in this and I would be stupid if I didn't say I could definitely relate XD lol.. that was a duh. But really hunni, it was absolutely stunning. I loved every single line and every stanza. You have really outdone yourself here. The flow was flawless and you captured the feelings of friendship, love, and family perfectly here. Great job, sweetie. Love you. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

I love it babe. . .
I love you too. . .
This is a wonderful poem that is so true and comes straight from the heart.
Its perfect, and i would change nothing of it.
Great work babe!! Keep it up!!!!
Ilyssssssssm

Tara, this is great. that's kinda all i can say right now..*hugs* wonderful. we love you too. <3