WOW...I LOVED IT.......5/5

This poem is like the opposit of my poem called < addiction> it tells of another
side of addiction. The part addicts pretend
we don't see. we always think we're only
hurting ourselves. but we know it hurts everyone. abyway excellent emotioal
piece good job cy

I've read your poem about addiction before and I thought about a few people who I know who are addicted to some substance and I thought I would write about the other side of the issue.

Excellent poem love i really enjoyed it. if this poem is about a loved one then i just want you to know ive been there trying cope with a loved ones addiction i know how hard it can be but there is hope love a brighter tomorrow my partner has now quit all his habbits and we are getting there slowly but surly. good luck keep faith x

This poem is deep and beautiful.
you did an excellent job.
and the second stanza really caught my eye, it was my favortie.
job well done.
kep up the nice work!