Streams Of Dreams

by Why am I fighting to live when Im just living to die   Jun 1, 2008


Life is but a stream
Yes a stream
Filled with man made dreams
Yes dreams
Some dreams turn to reality
Ones reality can be a fatality
Yes a fatality
Caused by brutality
Brutality caused by suicidal thoughts
Suicidal thoughts dripping down like rain in water pots
But in a drought there is no rain one only sees pain.

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  • 14 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    This is amazing. I LOVED it. GREAT JOB!

    keep writing!

    --Hannah

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsie Nicole

    For your first poem it was really well written.....i liked the rhyming keep up the great work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I LIKED IT GREAT JOB!

  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Wow, very good.
    If it was longer it could make a good song =]]
    Haha.

    It flowed well, like a stream itself. =]]
    It was strong and good. =D
    5/5!

    Great job!!!

    -Please, check out some of my poetry =]]-

    --**Skye~

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    This is good poetry, keep on doing what you do. 5/5

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