by Michael D Nalley Jun 1, 2008
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Life is like a Labyrinth with many twist and turns, |
Another wonderful and beautiful poem. |
Wow! this poem is great and when reading it I'm thinking, "demons, they influence people to bad.." |
Wow! this poem is great and when reading it I'm thinking, "demons, they influence people to bad.." |
Verryy good. there is a lot of imagery and meaning to it. sometimes i felt like it was too wordy or complex, but i just like simplicity, so nothing personal. overall 5/5 =] |
by Bugg
Omg, this is beautiful! I loved that you included the 7 deadly sins. I find them fascinating for some reason. This poem is very true on so many levels and it can apply to all different kinds of people. Keep up the good work! 5/5 |