The first line of this piece just captured me and made me curious to read the rest. The imagery here was just great and the meaning and truth also completed the poem for me making it that much more interesting to read. That last stanza was very powerful and left me as the reader wanting more. Well done *5/5*

Omg, this is beautiful! I loved that you included the 7 deadly sins. I find them fascinating for some reason. This poem is very true on so many levels and it can apply to all different kinds of people. Keep up the good work! 5/5

Verryy good. there is a lot of imagery and meaning to it. sometimes i felt like it was too wordy or complex, but i just like simplicity, so nothing personal. overall 5/5 =]

Wow! this poem is great and when reading it I'm thinking, "demons, they influence people to bad.."
well, great poem 5/5

Wow! this poem is great and when reading it I'm thinking, "demons, they influence people to bad.."
well, great poem 5/5

Another wonderful and beautiful poem.
I love the great words you use that make
the poem more interesting and more
readable. Once again, flawless.
<3Tay
5/5