Past Imperfect

by silent turbulence   Jun 1, 2008


I'm what I am
Though May be not, Or may be so,
Yet, just a thought,
I see in shades of Black and White,
Confused between wrong or right,
Trying to hight the wounds unseen,
Shadows dancing on a blank screen,
Escaping from memories that still affect,
I'm going to erase the past imperfect!

(had written this for a movie i was to make on MPD)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Ooo! I liked it! :D I have yet to understand the logic of your capitalizing some words and not others, but besides that I felt this piece was wonderful.

    The rhyming was inconsistent since you began not rhyming and then sort of through it in, but it's still a good poem. I enjoyed your word usage and would give this poem a four out of five.

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