Trust

by Shinobi   Jun 1, 2008


Detached from the lonely cold world
A place which had some importance
Warmth of people do not reach
No candle light, no such romance

Trying to keep my mind away from the edge
Falling down would be the last solution
Disconnected my heart will rest in peace
With not the slightest feeling or emotion

Cutting the strings which held me back
Free to wonder around the naked land
Those blockages held me from my true self
Personality warm, but dry as sand

Realizing my feelings are something beyond
Human mind can't solve this long lost state
In times my spirit could be soft and kind
In times my inner devil is born to hate

For the latest moments Dispatched as I was
No soul, nor light could come to my aide
Trust in people is a deed I've done
For that action in blood I payed

Love ignored, warmth had gone, light darkened
Hate appeared, tears were shown, heart frightened
Trust, where did I ever go wrong?
Trust, who could guess it would be so strong?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Good write to me......
    i liked the concept and the message you wanted to give.......
    a good poem of substance.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mason

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, and i really hope you write more. I loved the metaphors, just awesome

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderful write... good word choice and wonderful metaphors used..

    "Love ignored, warmth had gone, light darkened
    Hate appeared, tears were shown, heart frightened
    Trust, where did I ever gone wrong?
    Trust, who could guess it would be so strong? "

    ^^ this very touching... and very beautifully writtn...

    "Trust, where did I ever gone wrong?"
    ^^ thats one question that everyone ask at some point of time...

    A good read...
    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    I really liked this!
    good job and keep it up!

    (a few spelling errors) but thats about it!