This is touching. |
by NinjaGirl
Wow... a very sad and painful piece of poetry, with beautiful, fantastic wording and a brilliant flow |
Really really good- very touching very emotional-i like it alot |
I loved it, simple and touching, deep and emotional....5/5 |
by Alexis
Wow. |
by Michelle18
Very sad.. and heartfelt. |
by Darya
Wow |
"She sat there in her corner |
Wow, I have no favorite part, I love the whole thing! 6/5 lol. |
by Tina Marie
This is a powerful and painful poem. i hope things work out for you and keep faith up for your dad coming back. i have a dad who is never there and hasnt been for a long long time but you know sometimes the bad things that happen make you a stronger person |
This was insanly good! |
-----> She sat there in her corner |
THIS IS A VERY GREAT POEM I LIKE IT |
This is amazing and sad and very well written!! i love it.... 5/5 |
by Baby Rainbow
Really powerful wods here and made such a great poem of it, really drew me in and touched deep, well done keep it up hun xx |
WOW amazing job! |
by ChloeLauren
This is absolutley great!! |
Aww thats such a sad poem but its rly good. Everythin flows together amazingly. I love it |
Wow thats really good i love your use of emotion in it. |
This poem is deep i like it keep up the good work |