Great poem has lots of emotion. Keep up d good work!!

Wow! i love this!!! its really good!

Omg .. That was SAD . Usually , I break down poems , and point out their weak points .. But I can't do that with this one , neither can i give you any pointers . It's fantastic . The only little thing that kind of bothered me is that the rhyme sound is the same in the first two stanzas . Try to switch it up maybe ? 5/5

AWW :( :(
AMAZING :) :)
i dont know if i should cry or if i should be happy that u made something so0o0o0o amazing.
5outa5 :)
**Bri

Excellent write...saddening and powerful 5/5

This is a poem that just grabs your attention! its amazing. keep up the good work wow 5/5

This is amazing and so emotional and it is just beautifully written. Keep writing.