Comments : Suffocate

  • 16 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    Love love love it!!!! but u already know that :P

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    Wow that was so vivid and emotional. its a great poem. i can totally see where you went with it..amazing job :)

  • 16 years ago

    by 2weak2smile

    I wanted this one to be written different to my other poems, I think I achieved this. Please leave a comment, even if you didnt like it, im always open for constructive criticism, and looking to better myself.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Well theres really not much to say cos no words can describe the amount of passion and emotions that you put into ur poems... Yet another beautiful write!!
    ***Take care***

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexis

    Amazing :)
    ....
    wow.
    this was just incredibly powerful ...
    and sad, but beautiful..
    awesome job :)

    By the way,
    Love the song lyrics in your profile, ( the AFI)
    The song is called This Time Imperfect...
    ^.^.

    Peace :]