A very nicely expressed emotions towards God. I liked the simplicity of the poem. It's very easy to read kind of poem. Nice job. Keep writing!

Aww a beautiful peice
good job!
keep it up
God bless
Lisa

This is a very heart felt write, it was a very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. May your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.

Sadaddy